Muqabla e baiet baazi
#1
All members jaisa ke ap sab jaante hen ke bait baazi muqabla me her dost aik ya maximum do asha'ar post kerta he or jo pehla sher hota he us ke aakhri harf se aagla sher post kia jata he. to is thread me me ap sabko dawat deti hon ke ap sab is thread me bharpoor hissa len.
to sab se pehle me he is thread ka aaghaz kerti hon is sher ke sath

Note:

1. Last comment k last world se ap nain apny shair ko shuru krna hai
2. o=w, means agr last world "o" hai to ap "w" se shuru kr skty hain
3. Shair laziman "Urdu" ka hona chahey

Iss be'naam se rishte ko nibha jao kisi din,,,,
Jo mil jaye kabhi fursat to paas aa jao kisi din,,,,

Milta hy sabhi kuch sabhi ko ye suna hai ,,,,
Mujh ko to faqat tum hi mil jao kisi din ,,,,!
#2
Na thi aur koi bhi ranjishain, Sirf aadaton me tazaad tha
K usay pasand thi shokhiyan, Mujhe sadagi me kamaal tha
#3
Aey khuda mujh say na lay meray gunahon ka hisab
Meray paas ashk-e-nidamat k siwa kuch bhi nahin
#4
Noon se kafi mushkil se milta hai koi acha shae'r

"Na Smjho Gay To Mit Jao Gay Jahan Say
Tumhari Dastan Bhi Na Ho Gi Dastano Main... "
#5
Naam le ke tera log mujh se pOCHh rahy hain kia kia
main dar raha hun kahi mujh se HAAN na ho jae
#6
Yun to Sayyed bhi ho, Mirza bhi ho, Afghan bhi ho,
Tum sabhi kuch ho, batao to Musalmaan bhi ho ?
#7
wo na milen to kya hwa ye ishq hai hawwas nhi,,,,,,, main unhi ka tha unhi ka hun ,,wo mery nhi to na sahi...
#8
Ye saal bhi guzra hai Tere Pyaar ki Manind
Aaty huay kuch aur tha, jaaty huay kuch aur
#9
Apny bhi khafa hay mujse begaanay bhi na khush
mai zehr e hilahil ko kabhi keh na saka qund!......
#10
(09-06-2016, 01:52 PM)dil Wrote: Apny bhi khafa hay mujse begaanay bhi na khush
mai zehr e hilahil ko kabhi keh na saka qund!......

R se shuru kro @dil alif se nahi...
  




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